We love your story. Update it please :D

please continue the story

amazing :)

i hope ur getting at something, with this insident, i will be waiting for this to wake emily up of the hate everybody world!, nice job having us wanting more, jajaja

Your chapters always leave me wanting more. as sad as this chapter was, i'm glad to see emily finally show some emotion! hopefully naomi and emily can actually talk about how they're feeling and move past it!

UUURRRGGGGGHHHHH :'(

Damn you and your endings! Update this now! ;) love it man.

god, this story is getting worse, damn girl u know how to make a telenovela, jajaja i feel sorry x all of them but cook, but im still hoping x a wedding so i will wait x it, nice job making things more complicated, anyway love the story, ur a great writer, i will give u a fitch hug so u can keep writing the bads things that will come oh, and a kiss 2!

This story is really breaking my heart.

I feel so bad for Emily but she should let Naomi help her, I hope Emily doesn't push Naomi too far, they need to get through this together.

Hey!
Even though this chapter left me in a rather depressing state, I just wanted to say I like your story very much and that you are a very brave writer. It takes us a lot of courage to give so much suffering to characters we are as emotionally attatched to as Naoms and Ems, it's not something anyone can do.
So keep it going, hand us the next chapter soon. A little less heartbreacking perhaps? Lol.

u my friend is a pretty good writer.. e4 shouldve contracted you to write the skins novel lol.. although ive got to say this is really depressing bcoz of the rape thing..

oh man. this hurts soo bad. uggghhh

Love this story!

Why'd you take the baby outta incubator? ; n ;

I feel sorry for Cook for taking all the blames it should have been that motherfucking rapist. It must pay for everything every damage every tears I expect a worthy punishment.. Please.