oooh can't wait to see where this goes!

-tilts head- ... Huh. So is she like Zuko, then? Ashamed of what her nation, if she even IS from the Fire Nation, has done? It would explain why she steals from 'knotters' and gives to street rats and why Lien was so accepting of Zuko's origins. Update soon!

Great story. Please update soon. Ur a great writer

Ohhhh, nice surprise! Although she got into a little bit more trouble than she thought, because Zuko took down Zhao.

Continue it!

Exciting so far, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. So many ways that this story coulld go... and whatever way you take it will probably be pretty great.
Looking forward to your next update!

I really like this story and can't wait for more:)

I really like this. Update soon!

Interesting story here. A little word of warning though: don't fall into the trap that most authors do of making their OCs "perfect", or some exceptionally gifted prodigy that somehow performs better than most canon characters in different things. This is usually the main reason why I lose with most fanfics that have OCs; because they tend to be too perfect and sometimes it gets ridiculous how much better they are than people in canon, especially when it comes to fighting. For example, you kind of made Zuko look a little incompetent at the end of this chapter, what with him awkwardly walking in and then trying to walk out. Don't forget that this is the guy who single-handedly infiltrated a fortress and freed the Avatar, without any sort of bending may I add. If anyone knows how to handle himself, it's Zuko.

Other than that, I see a lot of potential for your story, and look forward to reading more!

I feel so bad for the girl that Zuko found. I never thought to call people from the Fire Nation knotters, that's clever. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Please update soon! I'll make sure to check out your sister's fic, it sounds so good!

great story

can't wait to see where you take this new character! Please continue! :)

I love this so far!
I can't get over the fact of how well written it is.
I can't wait to see more. :)

That's some truly emotionally powerful writting... Can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for taking the time to share.

I loved the father/son moments especially when Zuko signed his leter with "your son", so sweet! Poor Iroh, I hope he doesn't lose himself in depression, and hopefully he will find Zuko some day... Please continue! :) This was fantastic! :)