|Reviews for Let's Fly as the Birds Do|
| AoiHyou 1/25/03 . chapter 2
Aoi: I can't promise I can review every chapter (Due to immense lazyness. -_-) But i'll try!
Conclusion: Hiei is still sexy.
Hiei is ALWAYS sexy.
| AoiHyou 1/25/03 . chapter 1
Aoi: I finally finished the SAT's so i can have time to read! REALLY read!
Hiei: She has to review alone because Ayame is slower at reading. And Aoi is a betraying bitch.
Aoi: ...Shut up.
Aoi: You know, every time i read one of your fics i feel sooooo bad. Now i feel like learning the thesaurus. and if you make me WANT to learn... heh.
Kurama: It's a miracle.
Aoi: Well. Now i don't feel like typing my fic up. You're too damn good! *Dies*
Conclusion: Aoi dies easily... and your fic is wonderful. .
| Youko-Kali 1/21/03 . chapter 31
I love the story! Its absolutly beautiful! So far your story is the best I read out of 100's both in plot and in writing style! Also I found your little peice at the end extremly touching. It reminded me really of how blind I was to the world around me and to the feelings of all those I love. For that I thank you .
| Brieze 1/21/03 . chapter 31
That was awesome... You really have a way of expressing what you feel so clearly. It is interesting to see what others feel about this current world and our way of expressing feelings. I hope to read more fictions like this. You are an excallent writer.
| Shoujo Kitsune 1/18/03 . chapter 31
I like you story, I found it very enjoyable to read. It has a good writing style, and The Plot is intoresting
| Tymon 1/4/03 . chapter 31
Hey, you need to figure out the use of They're and Their. You are sometimes using them correctly but also sometimes not.
They're are they are.
their means belonging to.
Also you need to use the word too instead of to. Too means also and to means as an example i am going to the store, too.
There are some more errors in this story such as these.
You also have some incomplete sentences also. The sentence is missing words, for example this sentence, that their way. What does this sentence mean? from the chapter eternity when hiei and kurama were watching the rain run down the window.
All these comments apply to the story let's fly as the birds do.
The blue rose series is good and I will continue to read it, just thought I would point out some errors.
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| xKJM33 1/1/03 . chapter 31
Good LORDY! This is SO FANFUCKINGLYTASTIC AMAZING! I honestly don't know what to say. I had read part of this, somewhere, I really can't remember just where, and I got hooked. I loved the title, I never could forget it, and so when I saw your story here, on I was totally geeked up about it.. my sister was giving me funny looks. Actually, I surprised you don't have more reviews, you deserve more! Come on minna-san! Review goddamit! REVIEW!
| Kei-Kei 12/26/02 . chapter 1
Wow. I'm speechless. That was really nice. Just... everything.
| fox ears 12/19/02 . chapter 4
i like the story. i may not be a major fan of hxk fan fics but this ones an exeption. i hope to finish reading all of it soon
Fox Tailic Ears
| Betrayal 12/15/02 . chapter 31
i love this story. it's so good. it's one of the best stories i've ever read. (go Filipinos!) it's so sad, but really teaches about what it's truly like in life.
| foxlover 12/3/02 . chapter 31
your story it is one of the best things i've ever
read.i've read many books and this fanfiction ranks with may favorite books to name a few the hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy and fahrenheit 451.i love your story i hope you have thank you your story made me think in a new way.
| Achika 11/29/02 . chapter 31
This is SUCH a good fic. It just kept evolving and stating new things to think about. Where the hell did you become so wise? Damn. I spent as much time quoting this thing as I did actually reading it.
Despite a few grammatical errors, I laughed and, if I were that sentimental, cried at the romantic sappiness of it. This fic was well worth the hours I put into reading it.
| Ashton 11/24/02 . chapter 31
I LOVE this fanfic, it's the best I've read about hiei/kurama. (which I really dont read about any of the other characters) You are an exceptional writer and I hope you can continue writing like this for years to come. And I will keep reading (that if its about hiei/kurama):)
| Anti-Social Lemming 11/23/02 . chapter 31
Wow... This is amazing... I read this on your site more than a year ago and have been waiting for you to complete this story since. (I had written an email during that time, but my account got deleted so it never got sent ::sigh:: I generally chicken out of communicating with people...) And I have to admit that during that time I'd been worried that you stopped writing or that if you finished it the fic would be careless and a "whatever, just end it" type thing.
Thank goodness I was completely wrong.
I'm sure people have told you this (and reading previous reviews, find i am right), but your writing is incredible. Maybe it's because i can't seem to find that same depth when I write, but I deeply and utterly admire what you've done to and for the characters. It all makes sense and fits in, as well as expands and explains all their traits and everything.
Wow. I can't believe I didn't realize you updated this until two or so months later. I feel like an idiot. ::smacks self::
Also, I think it's also really quite interesting how people have reviewed this story. The majority of them are thoughtful reviews, not just short ones like, "nice" or "good." You've really touched people and how they responded is just a reaction of that. I normally don't write reviews, but I felt I had to after reading this. Heh. (wow... this is kinda long... .
| amaltia 11/4/02 . chapter 31
This is a really good story! _
Just finished it now and I'm really impressed!
Keep up the good work!