very cute!

I liked this a lot! You really stuck to the character's personalities, especially Dwight and Jim. I could really picture them saying the stuff you wrote. :)

This is really good! Nice to see an outsiders opinion of jim/pam in a fanfic. Awesome :) wish it wasn't a conplete story yet, another chapt wouldda been good :( love it though!

I love this! An interesting choice, Mrs. Beesly proves to be quite an observant point of view. I love how the Scranton Dunder Mifflin office is new to her, so she only knows about them from one previous visit and chats with Pam. If only this were canon and Helene had been able to point out to Pam that she is able to let her guard down around Jim, then maybe both would have been saved much heartache (but boy, did that make for good TV watching, haha).