Uhhh .. lol. What a coincidence at the least. that D'Artagnan is exactly like Logan Lerman, very unlikely, but it is fanfic so lol!

Oh. Hi,
I think this fanfic could use some improving because the thought flow changes a bit too quickly. First she's all okay with where she is, then she's scared ... yeah. Generally,I think your ideas are awesome, but you just need to work on the emotions and flow of thoughts bit. I can see how it's hard to write about what you havent really exprience, but if you work on it it will be just fine! :D

omg, this is so good! are you going to continue?