The idea drew me in but the layout of the story is hard to read. I suggest spacing the dialogue with it's own paragraph instead of writing one whole paragraph. With this, I would enjoy my reading experience more. :)

I really like it! Continue to do your best!

NOTE: We can make stories about other "Shall We Date?" Games? Other than Ninja Love, in this category? If yes...

Good but what do you think the next expansion will be about and how soon? I already have all the prince love stories and the newly married life