What a cliff-hanger to leave us on! A really great story so far- I love the Erin/Jonno pairing. The way you've gone about this story (and its prequel) is very sensitive. You've made the blossoming relationship between Jonno and Erin very believable, especially with all the hesitancy and awkwardness. I love Mina in this too! Hanging on for another update but no pressure :) x

Definitely seeing Mina's softer side here - she's a strong woman but definitely someone who cares. I think this chapter deals really well with the complications and responsibilities of becoming a parent- you definitely captured how incredibly huge this whole pregnancy thing and in such a sensitive manner as well. xo

Good xx

I really liked this chapter- you captured Erin's sense of disorientation perfectly, I don't know if it's deliberate but the contrast between the fairly ordinary every day things and conversations she is having now and the vampy craziness of life with the Draculas really works for me.
Oh sad moment about Ingrid and what Erin did back at Garside : (

xo

Good xx

I really liked the explanation for what happened between J/E - you fitted it around series 3 really well - using that window of opportunity with Bertrand's almost staking of Ingrid. It felt really sweet and ordinary, just two kids hanging out, I love Jonno's thoughts on Ingrid and the contrast between his feelings then for Ingrid and his feelings now for Erin. You've protrayed quite a tragic figure in poor Jonno.
Still loving Mina's reaction here- so realistic with her disappointment and her whole let's not rush.
Looking forward to more of J/E a pairing I quite like! xo

It's all so painfully realistic and believable and I just love that aspect of your writing. Of course Mina isn't going to jumping around the room going Yay! My son will be a dad at 17! Her reaction to go for the tea and the lines about the tea tray were wonderful- really captured Mina's situation/reaction. xo

ps BRANAGH

I am instantly in love with Gav. He sounds cool. I'm looking forward to seeing how this works out. Lots of sympathy for both Erin and Jonno here despite how Erin acted towards B/V. Loved J's slightly snarky thoughts about V/B and his reaction - completely believable.

xo

Aw, Jonno, such a well meaning sweetie 3

Good xx

Loving this so far, I have a huge soft spot for Jonno, and his misadventures!

Good xx

Good xx