|Reviews for In Sickness and In Health|
| writingalone 12/5/12 . chapter 9
I loved this story
| Amy0102 11/28/12 . chapter 9
Do I need to comment anything else? :)
| millie.zhang 11/28/12 . chapter 9
Sad that it has ended.
I really enjoy this story soooo much...
And this chapter is as awesome
I love the paranoid Will who is worried about Mac getting a fever...even though it was a mere cough...
and WIll recognized by half of the airport staff...LOL. Love that
And the vocation is fantastic..."Do I get to see you in a bikini?"...haha great flirtations! LOVE IT
""For better or worse?""In sickness and in health. But I'd prefer you stay healthy from now on, ok?"...OH GOD I melted.
Thank you for this excellent story! Your pen name is right- you do work with pens:-) You are a great writer and maybe I will bombard you with daily emails as well:-)
| Katycat1970 11/28/12 . chapter 9
awww - lovely end to a lovely story matey...
Love the 2 of them watching out for each other... just as it should be...
And a great ending to the story - Love that Mac surprised Will rather than the other way around...
"They were both all in this time….from this day forward for as long as they both shall live." - GREAT last line... :)
Thanks ever so much for posting - have enjoyed this from beginning to end...
| landingzone 11/27/12 . chapter 9
nice ending, the vacation was perfect. congrats on finishing!
| teanc09 11/27/12 . chapter 9
Very nicely done! Great ending. I like how Mac has come full circle and realizes she was watching him as much as he was watching her.
| lilacmermaid33 11/27/12 . chapter 9
Great job! (But I'm sad to see this one come to an end). I love the idea of them both watching each other (for different reasons) to make sure they're going to be okay. I especially love him staying awake listening to her breathe.
| Late-For-Dinner 11/18/12 . chapter 8
What a great chapter! :) Will is so adorable, his concern for Mac is the sweetest. Looking forward to seeing how you bring this all to a conclusion. :) x
| millie.zhang 11/18/12 . chapter 8
this whole story is a masterpiece! *applause*
I recommended it to my friends already...
| Katycat1970 11/18/12 . chapter 8
Another lovely chapter... :)
I loved Mac rushing into work even if Will was angry with her and I loved how she slowly came to realise he was scared rather than angry... And I LOVED how Mac turned it all around and started to take care of him...
"I can't lose you Mac. Not this time" he whispered into her ear. "I know and you won't Will. I promise." - *sigh*
REally enjoyed this - sad it's coming to an end but I'm sure you'll write more for us soon? yes? :)
THanks for posting...
| forjustaminute 11/17/12 . chapter 8
OMG i always enjoy your writing so much!
I love the workaholic Mac...hailing a cab to ACN...hmm, i believe that's something she will do on the show if she really gets sick...
Sloan's reactions have been so cute. And Will's outburst is so in character.
By the way have i mentioned how much I love the title "in sickness and in health"? Reading it will melt me already.
So sad it is coming to an end.
U will spoil us with more new stories right:-D
| SerialStoryLover 11/17/12 . chapter 8
Sloan's outburst was hilarious, and I love Will taking a stand with Mac - although I think she's right and he needs to sleep too. Hopefully there will be loads of Will and Mac fluff in the next chapter :) So sad to hear that it's the last! Please say you have more stories buzzing up there in your genius brain!
Thank you for posting! I'm in withdrawal in my impatience for more updates :p
| teanc09 11/17/12 . chapter 8
Great chapter. Love how Sloan is pissed and doesn't care who is in the room when she goes off on Mac. I like the scared Will and how she gets to take care of him for a while.
| lilacmermaid33 11/17/12 . chapter 8
Still my favourite chapter, especially that whole last scene.
I love the changes you made. That first paragraph really pulls the whole thing together and makes it stronger, because it shows that she's rushing in there to save *him* as much as to save the show. And I really like this part: [But she knew that was all just for show. He only shouted when he felt he had the better argument. He shouted because he enjoyed intelligent debate.]
I'm sad this story is coming to an end!
| lilacmermaid33 11/12/12 . chapter 7
I really like how this chapter turned out. Especially the Jaws thing! :)