your story is good but when the girls like harry and harry likes the girls. Hermione should like him too. But she ignores him a lot and then harry gets worried and then one night harry finds hermione crying in the common room and stuff. but other than that its good.

why do poeple like you always write about yourselfs and your friends falling in love with the characters.what a sad loser.

cool- funneeeee!!!!

Hey girl! You'll never guess who this is...actually, you'll probably just look at the name and know...Anyway, very interesting so far...you should check out muh fanfics. Juat look me up, girl! ^-^ Great story!

hey- this is great- can't wait for chapter 2- I'm set with a beta reader right now, but if I ever need someone else I'll be sure to ask you first! I really like your story!