This was really good! I love it soo much! You write Alison so well, It's amazing!

Well done :) xox

Aww his son. Bless. Really good update hunni xxx

Oooh I love the last bit with her talking to Veronica's mother - and the bleach! That gave me a little shock. I like how you're weaving that storyline (with the flashback as well) into this even though it's based on the first episode when we didn't know about that, because of course it would still affect her then. Intruiging.

OMG. Loooooove it. You're putting me in the mood to go watch it again :D

Ooooh I love getting inside Alison's head! It is a strange and wonderful place. I hope there is more. I really enjoyed the way you placed it in the context of the episdoe but then moved it away and gave us more.

Aww that was a really good first chapter!

You're carrying on aren't you? You better ;)

I really like it, I can just imagine being sat in that audience... creepy but cool! xox