I liked this chapter. It was good. But you forgot Tristan...

What happened to getting uniforms and school?

Fakir! He's my favorite character in the show, not by his looks, but his personality. And they DEFINITELY look SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER...deep breath...
CUTE!

Interesting story but it doesn't feel like it's going anywhere... Please make Duck and Fakir get together! Also, the personas are getting kind of annoying... Is the sole purpose of their lives to torment Fakir? Anyways, love the story but just want some more

I just noticed myself in this chapter, that Kace seems the most mature of the personawhen I thought he would be running around and crying "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"

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Ryker! Because Ryker is easier for Fakir to block out. Well, that may be a bad thing, since while blocking Ryker out quickly may result to another emotion persona much stronger like Kace will come in... so I pick neither!

Duck, when Fakir, who barely shows feeling and is a meanie, looks at you in the eye with serious eyes and tells you that he's not letting you go, you JUST turn away and say "I love SNOW", I will make you marry MR. CAT! or NEKO-SENSEI for Japanese!

Good...

Good..

Good

Make fakir so he's super protective of duck

I think it was really good but try to put in more a motion in between duck and fakir I get it he keeps slipping up in the relationship but he should have a good chance with her for once with no one there to mess up for him like a secret date or a dance seen of duck and fakir if you need anymore advice just ask me ha have so many ideas. PS add a giant twist to fakir.

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD IH MY GOD.
It is soooo good.
And I had a tiny little question.
Could I use the personas in one of my fanfictions? They'd really add to te drama and terror of the next few chapters. Just a few of them.