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The idea of Fili only wanting to stay at home and read and write is an interesting one :)

Your style of writing is clear, and you have excellent grammar. It is certainly interesting to have it from Fili's perspective.

Hi! First of all, I found your story really interesting! I've always considered Fili as an adventurous and risk taker Dwarf, like the other twelve, and now I see him under e new light, and I think he is a quite interesting Dwarf also as a writing and reading lover!
I also loved the way he describes his brother Kili and the way he decides to take part in the journey! Thanks for this story! :)
Ehm, in the end... I beg your pardon for my English, probably I made some mistakes, but I'm Italian.