| Reviews for Vault Charlie |
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Avatar Gita 2/12/13 . chapter 5Hey you used Phyllis cool! Great chapter! |
MCGSCEFFAAWHETJH55555 12/16/12 . chapter 4I still don't understand this whole story. I'm le confused, man. |
Dantalion 12/11/12 . chapter 2Interesting. |
Valorknight 12/10/12 . chapter 4I LOVE THIS STORY! Also nice job bring in the classic survivors (R.I.P Bill). Looking forward to new chapters. |
Nick of the WaterTribe 12/9/12 . chapter 4i love this i am potrayed right. i cant wait till next time |
Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 4 Nice job man. Keep it up! |
Geekman-1 11/13/12 . chapter 3just want to say awesome story. i like this alot. i dont have any ideas for characters but maybe you should have someone who is an underdog. a person who is hardly mentioned but provides crucial parts |
Jedssisme1 11/12/12 . chapter 3Yay! This was a super great chapter and I'm super happy you put my character in it! Update soon! :) |
Nick of the WaterTribe 10/27/12 . chapter 2did you take the Vault Idea from Fallout |
Jedssisme1 10/26/12 . chapter 1Name: Enya Yiun Gender: Female Hair Color:Black Height:5 ft. 6in. Weight:119Ibs. Preferred weapon of choice: Sword, or knife, but she is okay with a pistol, too. Hand to Hand expertise (Great, good, okay, poor):great Personality: She's 16, and acts like a 16 year old would in a zombie apocalypse. Except she's quiet, more of a listener and a people watcher. She studies the way each person acts and she also keeps a cheek cell sample of every person she meets and every zombie she kills, and she keeps the samples in small baggies in her backback. Some Backstory: She was abandoned at an orphanage by her mother in China, and adopted by a couple who had twin sons. She was an AP student in all her classes, and loved biology and the study of humans (hence the cheek cell samples). She was also a wiz when it came to technology and her goal is to study the virus and see it's progression. She wants to find a cure. Her mother and father were bitten in the early stages of the virus, and they bit her brothers, and she had to kill them all. Attire Preference:She wears black spandex leggings all the time for the ease of movement. Her only shoes are dark brown mid-calf boots which she got off a zombie she killed. She also wears a black zip up sports jacket over a white T-shirt. Family (within the vault, parents, siblings, etc.): No family within the vault. Rank (excluding Alpha 3): Super smart and good with melee weapons, I don't really know what rank means, so whichever you thing she should be. This is a cool story! I hope you add her in! :) |
Valorknight 10/15/12 . chapter 1Good start for the story looking forward to reading more of it. PM'ed you a Oc. |
Dantalion 10/14/12 . chapter 1Hmm, I interested in reading more of this. |