|Reviews for Vault Charlie|
| Avatar Gita 2/12/13 . chapter 5
Hey you used Phyllis cool!
| MCGSCEFFAAWHETJH55555 12/16/12 . chapter 4
I still don't understand this whole story. I'm le confused, man.
| Dantalion 12/11/12 . chapter 2
| Valorknight 12/10/12 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY! Also nice job bring in the classic survivors (R.I.P Bill). Looking forward to new chapters.
| Nick of the WaterTribe 12/9/12 . chapter 4
i love this i am potrayed right. i cant wait till next time
| Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 4
Nice job man. Keep it up!
| Geekman-1 11/13/12 . chapter 3
just want to say awesome story. i like this alot. i dont have any ideas for characters but maybe you should have someone who is an underdog. a person who is hardly mentioned but provides crucial parts
| Jedssisme1 11/12/12 . chapter 3
Yay! This was a super great chapter and I'm super happy you put my character in it! Update soon! :)
| Nick of the WaterTribe 10/27/12 . chapter 2
did you take the Vault Idea from Fallout
| Jedssisme1 10/26/12 . chapter 1
Name: Enya Yiun
Height:5 ft. 6in.
Preferred weapon of choice: Sword, or knife, but she is okay with a pistol, too.
Hand to Hand expertise (Great, good, okay, poor):great
Personality: She's 16, and acts like a 16 year old would in a zombie apocalypse. Except she's quiet, more of a listener and a people watcher. She studies the way each person acts and she also keeps a cheek cell sample of every person she meets and every zombie she kills, and she keeps the samples in small baggies in her backback.
Some Backstory: She was abandoned at an orphanage by her mother in China, and adopted by a couple who had twin sons. She was an AP student in all her classes, and loved biology and the study of humans (hence the cheek cell samples). She was also a wiz when it came to technology and her goal is to study the virus and see it's progression. She wants to find a cure. Her mother and father were bitten in the early stages of the virus, and they bit her brothers, and she had to kill them all.
Attire Preference:She wears black spandex leggings all the time for the ease of movement. Her only shoes are dark brown mid-calf boots which she got off a zombie she killed. She also wears a black zip up sports jacket over a white T-shirt.
Family (within the vault, parents, siblings, etc.): No family within the vault.
Rank (excluding Alpha 3): Super smart and good with melee weapons, I don't really know what rank means, so whichever you thing she should be.
This is a cool story! I hope you add her in! :)
| Valorknight 10/15/12 . chapter 1
Good start for the story looking forward to reading more of it.
PM'ed you a Oc.
| Dantalion 10/14/12 . chapter 1
Hmm, I interested in reading more of this.