|Reviews for Rise of the Collective|
| Chooocolate 5/19/13 . chapter 2
cant wait for the next chapter!
| NightWithMoon 3/27/13 . chapter 2
quite amusing an very interesting... I have to admit I definitely like the style you have your character building!
I hope you aren't done with this yet, I'm kinda disapointed there isn't another chapter
| Ethorin 3/22/13 . chapter 2
this is interesting...
| gothicjedi666 3/13/13 . chapter 1
Thanks for the putting Overlord Gothic in your story.
| smexyforever 2/10/13 . chapter 2
an OC story that isint boring to tears...
| Raizen 1/26/13 . chapter 2
Hi, I hope u don't intend to abandon Rise of the Collective..It's a great story with a lot of potential like 'Galactic Imperium'..
Also u haven't reposted Rise of an Empire fic too..Please update soon..
It was like one of the best crossovers of Star Gate & Harry Potter verses..At the rate u were updating it was my favorite fic ever, but u have stopped updating or reposting it any more...
Hoping to hear from u soon..
| Darth Xion 1/26/13 . chapter 2
Well written mega-crossover..I noticed u stopped updating a while back & we miss you..Please update soon..
| Exess 1/20/13 . chapter 2
ah wish fulfillment ... cool
| ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER 1/15/13 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story and I love stories like this, but do you plan on updating soon? I do realise you have a life outside of Fanfiction, but I think 3 months without updating is more then pushing it.
I'm loving the slow buildup to starting an empire and I like how you took Shaw's ability and made it alot cooler.
Are you planning on Dorian going by the name Accretion from now on?
Another reveiwer had the great idea of Dorian having his own source of energy with him, so he can use his energy abilities without taking it from elsewhere and maby Dorian can take Peter Petrelli's ability to absorb other's powers so he dosen't have to worry about only being aloud to have a set limit of abilities.
Anyway, I hope you update soon, because the suspense of what will happen next is killing me.
| Malix2 1/10/13 . chapter 2
Okay, this is an /AWESOME/ story. I'm really liking it. I hope I can see another chapter soon. I think it's been about 3 months apparently. I really want to see where this is going next. :)
| cardo076 1/10/13 . chapter 1
Maybe you could go to the Fate Stay Night Universe and get him some noble phantasms.
| sadfru 12/27/12 . chapter 2
Love the slow build up to an empire, the fast build up was one of the negatives I had with vexmaster (the wanking in general and his omnigod BFF being the other), also lovin the power growth, a bit of a training montage wouldn't go astray but oh well :)
| Loatroll 12/27/12 . chapter 2
Awesome stuff! Thanks for the excellent read. Really looking forward reading what happens next!
| Junky 12/22/12 . chapter 1
I want Empire! /wah
I wish I archived it, lol.
| cruailsama 12/21/12 . chapter 2
great story so far hope it dont turn to a mindless fuckfest like some others