Reviews for Coming Home
h2omermaidforever 2/18/13 . chapter 1
Cool great I knew it would of been Emma but I still gasped for some odd reason but just one note I would thing I think Bella or Will might of gone to college.
ObsessedwReading 11/24/12 . chapter 6
Great chapter. I hope Emma and Rikki get their powers back.
Guest 11/8/12 . chapter 3
uh oh.
Guest 11/8/12 . chapter 1
nice, nice
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 6
will is being so weird. and who the heck is liam?! bella needs to focus on the fact at hand!

update soon! your story is really good
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 5
WOAH! i hate charlotte. and wow, i was not expecting this kind of twist!
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 4
your strong point is definitely writing in 3rd person view. poor emma... and i understand rikki is upset but damn! she was sounding a bit harsh too!
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 3
interesting point of view ... i wonder who liam is too ...
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 2
woah! who is charlotte talking about? interesting twist!
TristeAlma 11/9/12 . chapter 1
Wow! i love the beginning of your story! awesome intro to emma being back
BlazingLegend 11/8/12 . chapter 6
Oooh, what will happen next? I can't wait to find out! I love this story, it's great. I'll be waiting for the next chapter... if you need me... which you probably won't...
H2OGirl101 11/8/12 . chapter 6
Great chapter :) I hope Bella can get to Cleo in time and Will to Rikki and Emma :P
BlazingLegend 10/31/12 . chapter 3
Wait, does this mean that Will like Emma? I can't wait to find out!
BlazingLegend 10/31/12 . chapter 1
Ooooh! I can't wait to read what happens next! Lol! Will kissed Emma! So funny.
ObsessedwReading 10/30/12 . chapter 5
NO! Rikki and Emma can't lose their powers! and Sophie and Charlotte can't become mermaids! ;(
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