|Reviews for DSFA|
| Caycee 12/30/12 . chapter 1
Nice job! My problem is that the pacing is way off though. Your going way too fast, slow down.
| Guest 10/18/12 . chapter 1
Good, but it could have started off as Claudia's parents wanting her to go to to a tradional four year university and being adamant on it. Either way its not bad and its still better than the clutter that's on the first few pages.
| artful 10/17/12 . chapter 1
it's Da Vinci, not however you spelled it.
get a dictionary and some new story ideas.