Fabulous! The transition from babyface to heel was very subtle but when it was finally realized it blew people away like a uh..hurricane! (Sorry, I couldn't resist _) Benoit and Storm are perfect tag partners, and to me it also seems like Benoit also now actually has a personality. In the WWF television shows, he seems to be just another heel with gold as his top priority. The signs the fans created were a nice touch. I hope I'm not making a pest of myself by saying this again, but please make some interaction with Stephanie McMahon Helmsley! I love this storyline and eveything about it, keep writing! :)
Another fic gone well done by a great fic author! _ So, your not there to where Rikishi said that he ran down Stone Cold yet huh? Here are some ideas to help ya for the next one! Ummmm...how about the Storm is a heel for a little while, with Benoit, Angle, and...uhhhh...KANE! *OKAY! So I couldn't think up of anything else!* And then you have a match between Kane, the Storm, Angle, and Benoit vs. The Rock, The Undertaker,...uhhh...Jericho!, and...and...JUST JOE! Okay, so that's a little bad...i know! i know! And then...he becomes good, and allies with Stone Cold! _ Hey, there both from Texas, right? So Texans can get along...right? Oh wait...Micheals vs. Austin feud...but they got along well after the end...right? RIGHT? _- *Rock's eyebrow*. Oh well... Anyway, then the Storm and Austin become Tag Team parterns, and become Tag Team CHAMPIONS! THEN, they have to go against it each other in a Four Way Elimination Match with Triple H, The Rock *the champ, I guess*, Stone Cold, and the Storm! Is that good? Hope so! And btw, I LOVE METALLICA! It's great that the Storm's entrance music is that! _ Anyway, zyah!
*bows respectfully to Jay* From one author to another, this was superb. Joe really needed to get his ass beat, Benoit and Storm were the perfect pair to do it. THANK YOU for finally being the person who put Lawler in his place. His comments aren't appreciated in the least, but now he seems to be lightening up a little on RAW and Smackdown! In the next chapter, could you please have an interaction with Stephanie McMahon-Helmsely and the Force of Nature? That would be very interesting and I'd love to read it. (I'm going to read the fics anyway but it's just a suggestion _) The Storm is an absolutely dynamic character, and by the way it's wonderful to see how everything is spell-checked. Too many authors have many errors in their work. Keep writing, I hope the next chapter comes out soon. :)
The Storm Warning.. Mr. Regal.. SHUT YOUR CAKEHOLE *rolls on the floor laughing* The Storm is a great character, a wonderful badass babyface (good guy) and definitely can get the crowd going. He seems like Stone Cold Steve Authin in a way though..anyway write more soon please!
Dejah Thoris 10/6/00 . chapter 1
The beginning was great, but the ending...disappointing. I could do better than that. In fact, I think I will. Watch for a rather interesting fanfic coming soon.
Great fic! Love the style of writing! Descriptive, long, and VERY entertaining! Like the fic wrestler Storm. Did you know at first I thought that it was AUSTIN! _;; Anyway, I can't wait for the next one! Don't wanna rush ya, cause I'm a fic writer myself. _ Zyahs!