It would be horrible if this happened! I can totally understand your inspiration for this story but I'm so glad it won't happen. Interesting read.

yeah i can see this as a possible plot path.

Uggh this hurt to read! Curse you for making me feel! (Thank you though!)

NOOOOO! :(

So angsty but sooo good. I also would hate for this to happen, but sometimes that's just how it works out. This was real sad but I loved it. :)

The grammar and story line is decent, but your dialogue doesn't flow very well.