Not bad. It certainly explains Daemon's past . . .

Pretty good and kinda funny. However, I have one problem... WHAT THE DELL DID YA DO TO TURBO!?! You-you've massacred his accent! He sounds like Mouse! Anyways, one really shouldn't do accents. Most fans of the show know what the characters voices sound like. Oh great, I'm beginning to rant. Well, other than the whole accent thing, it is a nice fic.

~Do I Really Need to Sign my Name?

Wow! Awsome idea!

Maybe a little bit of _overkill_ on Turbo's accent, but good otherwise. I'm reading this about three weeks after Daemon Rising aired in Canada, so the truth is already revealed, but it's interesting how your version and Mainframe Entertainment's version both have the whole "looks-are-deceiving" gimmick.

*awed silence* Wow, this is what I call a great short fic. Your two sprites managed to come off fully alive with personalities in the short time they appeared, and Daemon's plight and rescue were credible, frightening, and interesting. This story is definitely a good reminder that sometimes even the most benign things can be the most dangerous. I also really liked the structure of this fanfic and Daemon's parody of Matrix, AndrAIs's, and Bob's usual monologue at the end.

that's really good. i hope they come up with a 4th season soon. they can't just leave it open like that without giving us any info on what happens! oh well, i guess that just means more room for fanfics, right?

Wow! That was really good!