 ShadowHawk 8/20/09 . chapter 1interesting, PS - Need to ask if you can give an assessment for my Two-Face Story regarding the latest chapter. |
 Eilla 9/4/01 . chapter 1 *Much* more thrilling than the first one! Excellent characterization, the father-daughter scenes were never sappy, and Paxton sounded just like the @$$hole he is. |
 Ryan Berke 4/15/01 . chapter 1Another good Fic. Mr. Winger, you have got some TALENT there! Stranger is an interesting character, but not so major as to corrupt the storyline. You've preserved the general events of the show, maintaining consistency with it's overall plot. |
 Mary Mack 3/15/01 . chapter 1 Smartly done, both of them. |
 firedew 2/10/01 . chapter 1 Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it. |
 BatmanBeyond316 12/2/00 . chapter 1WOOOHOOOO It's about time Mr. Freeze is given a chance to have a life |
 cougarcm20 10/25/00 . chapter 1 Another well-written "episode". Keep it up! |
 Pacifay Itheroe 10/16/00 . chapter 1 this was very good. I am a huge Victor Fries fan. I'm glad that you wrote this story about him. You're a very good writer, you made the story go fast, but noone really notices. The mysterious Stranger was also a good idea. Keep writing, it'd be a shame to waste your talents. |
 Jamie Thomas Durbin 10/11/00 . chapter 1That's a damn fine piece there, Jay... As I've said before, you ought to get that one in the TV series, or the comic book at least. This Stranger guy... Is he actually in the series? I haven't been able to keep up, not having a tv, and having no-one to tape the series for me...
If not, he's a damn fine creation, for which I applaud you |
 FireDragon 10/9/00 . chapter 1 Great story! I would love to see another! I'm not very creative, but if I was I would help you with an idea :) Keep up the good work! |
 SilverKnight 10/5/00 . chapter 1I liked this one too. I enjoyed how you keep the Stranger anonymous, not delving into him too much-or at all, for that matter. If you ask me, he kind of reminds me of Dick Grayson. :) Can't wait for more. |