I like both the firs and the second.

This is a good fic. I enjoy seeing things from Molly's POV.

Interesting. I'd love to see this turned into the start of an AU or maybe a distant future sequel set after the main series ends when Harry and Molly just keep on living

Like the new version, it's a little less angsty, and feels a bit more in line with the books, especially the reasoning behind Molly keeping her vision in the soulgaze to herself

Good little one shot, didn't move me as much as I would of liked but there is only so much that can be done in a thousand words

Nice. There needs to be a lot more stuff with Dresden and Molly, in my opinion. :)