|Reviews for Apology Girl's Dues|
| celeryy 2/2/13 . chapter 1
ohh myy godd
My only critique would be that ending on "I still love you" felt maybe a tiny bit maudlin...But maybe that's just the way I heard the line in my head. If I read it again it'd probably sound fine...
AWWWW he wanted to make her huevos rancheros again!
ugh, my heart
Really though he was such a good boyfriend (except for the drugs thing)
I know you wanted to hear ideas for your other fic, "Insights", about potential scenes in season 5.2, but I would LOVE to see a second chapter in *this* story where Jane's father hears the voicemail and has a moment of reflection...That would be really interesting, since we didn't really get to see how he feels about Jesse, or whether he blames him for Jane's death. I mean because obviously there'd be some of that, since to him Jesse's just some punk, and Jane was doing fine until they started getting close...
| Dan Sickles 12/10/12 . chapter 1
This was so beautifully written! You capture all of Jesse's emotions and really make us cry for him. Hope you will do more stories like this one very soon!
| elle 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Goddamnit all of my feels man /3 ;_;
| Guest 10/25/12 . chapter 1
You sure you didn't yank this from a deleted scene? This is very good and very in-character!
| TrenchcoatsAreSexy 10/20/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Damn, I wish I even knew what to say. A lot of the time I was halfway between smiling and bawling - you capture Jesse's feelings perfectly here. I really hope you write so much more for the fandom; you are great at imagery and bringing the reader into the moment. Great job! I loved Jesse's message so much, too. So him. *hugs Jesse*
| super ario 10/18/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Just, wow. If only I was on my laptop right now, I could leave you a nice, long, detailed review. I hate reviewing from mobile but I just wanted to say...wow. This is one of the best BrBa pieces I've had the chance to read yet. Great work! Please continue writing for this fandom. It doesn't have nearly enough good writers.