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| Reviews for Folive Birthday |
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   Dominosrule 12/1/12 . chapter 1This is a nice story, good plot, but there were punctuation problems. |
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 5 the ending to this chapter is cool. |
| Green and purple hero 11/24/12 . chapter 4 Update please |
| Guest 11/11/12 . chapter 4 Your right Busybee123 school is making everyone busy like classes, homework, projects, etc. |
| Vamplove218 11/11/12 . chapter 1 Good!Great plot, but can you use quotation marks for future dialogue or stories? |
| Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 3 this chapter is great hope u make a fourth one |
| Guest 10/23/12 . chapter 2 nice chapter. i think there was enough food. my favorite food is porkchops. |
| flubber 10/21/12 . chapter 1 Ooh surprise parties ftw!:D update soon(: |
| Guest 10/21/12 . chapter 1 this story is good. |
| Guest 10/17/12 . chapter 1 Hhmm interesting wonder wat China and Fletcher r up 2. |
| Guest 10/17/12 . chapter 1 oooo looks like this is gonna be interesting.. i think the plot is good, but don't try to rush into the story, take time |
