|Reviews for Hanging Ten: Witchy Woman|
| The Prime Writer 4/22/13 . chapter 1
Dude, you must be close to finishing the second chapter of this story. Please update it soon, I want it to continue. On another note, here are several aliens that I would like to see you add in this story, or maybe in you're future Hanging 10 stories: Wildmutt, Stinkfly, Wildvine, Diamondhead, Upchuck (I think Reef and Broseph would get a kick out of that one), Ditto, Upgrade, and Heatblast. Also, try having Bummer, Ripper, Lance, Kelly, Rosie, and Kahuna getting in on the alien secret; you could have Bummur using Ben's aliens to attract aliens for more tourists and thus gain more money...and you could have Ripper fart near Ben while he's in Heatblast mode. Those are my suggestions, and I hope you'll take the time to consider them.
| Hermes 3/27/13 . chapter 1
This story is an opportunity to introduce Verdona. Please introduce her, in human form at first preferably.
| Jackpot 2 2/13/13 . chapter 1
This is pretty good. Hope you update soon.
| Alliance Empire 1/2/13 . chapter 1
When are you gonna update this nice sequal?
| Marty F 11/30/12 . chapter 1
are you ever go to update
| Emperor of the Animal Kingdom 11/13/12 . chapter 1
This. Is. Awesome! Nice move on WayBig's debut in this series. Charmchaster here? Makin' her move on Johnny? Can't imagine what disasters follow when her plan sets in motion. Frankly, I'd rather Grimlock in his dinosaur mode. That's how bad her plot is -however ya gonna play it out-, and I'm sayin' that as a compliment!
| Hermes 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Could you introduce Verdona at some point?
| Hermes 11/3/12 . chapter 1
In my opinion Charmcaster is more like Gwen's enemy rather than Ben's, so I imagine that she's looking to go for Gwen.
In this story the Stoked gang will learn that magic is real. How will they react to that?
| Jman 10/20/12 . chapter 1
Hey, The Writer With No Name,
I've been a fan of this Ben 10/Stoked crossover saga ever since you published the first book over two years ago, but I was so blown away with complete amazement that I totally forgot to review the first two books! I personally promise you that will review every chapter of the continuing saga from now on, as it deserves the highest praise. Seriously, dude, you are an amazing writer! Every time I read this series I get "Way Big Stoked" (yes, pun intended, haha!)!
Also, great job on Ben and Lo's relationship. I think it's beautiful and wonderful how their relationship develops and progresses throughout the series. Even after all they've been through from disliking each other, becoming closer as friends and then cruching on one another, hooking up, Lo freaking out about Omnitrix and nearly breaking Ben's heart, and Lo getting possessed by Ghostfreak, they still come out okay and hold the same care and affection for each other and become stronger as a couple. I feel bad for Johnny though with Emma never noticing him or returning his feelings and getting played by Charmcaster (yeah, I figured out who she is) to get her revenge on Ben and Gwen. Johnny, bro, I feel your pain, man. However, I personally think that Emma and Ty make a really cute and nice couple together (I've seen the Stoked episode "Heartbreak Hotel), but it's your story and your saga so keep doing what you think is best.
Finally, the comedy throught the series laugh out loud hysterical! You are a comedic wizard, dude! And I should know: I was given the honorary title of "Class Clown" during my junior year of high school, so you're taking to the Clown Prince of Classroom Comedy (CPCC). The funniest moments throughout the whole series so far is when Ben and Lo walk in on Mr. and Mrs. Ridgemount doing each other on the kitchen table and Lo finding out from her mother that she (Lo) and Ty were concieved on that very table! Not only is that "classic", as said by Kevin, that is pure 24 karat gold! You can't beat that kind of humor. Not only was my face red from laughing my ass off so hard, my cheeks were swollen throughout the duration of chapters 2 and 3 of the second book. I'm sure Ben, Lo (especially her), and Ty will be scarred and traumatized for life!
Anyways, keep writing, dude. You are an amazingly talented author, probably one of the best on Fanfiction. Net. This is the best Stoked (and Ben 10) fanfic out there. You have an incredibe gift that must be shared with and known to the world, and I encourage you to go the distance to achieve that ultimate goal!
your big and loyal fan and friend (if you consider me that even though we've never met)
| Kamen Rider Ebon 10/20/12 . chapter 1
I see big relationship drama coming up
Update soon please
| StrongGuy159 10/20/12 . chapter 1
Cool chapter continue please.
| The True One-Winged Angel 10/19/12 . chapter 1
I like. I'd give a deeper review, but I think I'll wait till next chap.
Till then, keep on keepin on.
| Frosty Wolf 10/18/12 . chapter 1
One of my favorite cartoon crossover series is back, well done. I like how you display the characters, hope you can continue the good work.
| KidChaos69 10/17/12 . chapter 1
Yes ive been waiting so long for the next installment of the hanging ten series and its looking good so far
| SoNoEcho 10/17/12 . chapter 1
'Blinking himself out of his brain-stall, Johnny took a deep breath…and sighed. "Excuse me for a moment." Without waiting for a reply, he turned, and walked away, heading to the washroom, going into a stall, and locking the door.
I don't know about you, but if I heard that coming from a bathroom stall... XD
The part with Way Big was HILARIOUS. I wouldn't like it if some stranger was playing golf in MY house. ;P
I would've reviewed yesterday, but I didn't get the email... I swear, I have you on Author Alert... Don't I? :/ Either way, I can't wait for the next chapter! ;D