Wonderful! Very enjoyable reading. I really liked the way you opened up the story, and at the end Jimmy saying "Pass it on"

This line : '"Whore." The epithet slipped from his lips like a rumble of thunder presaging a storm.' Really nice imagery that.

Look forward to more of your stories. L.

Excellent.

I really liked this, especially the interaction with Ike. I was you would continue this fic and show a relationship developing between Angel and Ike.

Cute back round story