I just read your story and I really like it :) I'm not a Bobby/Tara fan, quite the contrary, because I like Bobby/Darcy and it's the reason I actually decided to read it ;) Well, I read the story and I really enjoyed it :) At the beginning I suspected it's going to turn out a bit different, but it's still good :) And I'm glad Jack and Sue, as well as Bobby and Darcy got engaded *jumps*. Hmm.. It's sad to read that the second part isn't going well, but I'll be waiting patiently ;)

That was sweet ending. Thank you for sharing your writing with us! :)

Well, this is moving along to a very happy ending, indeed! :)

congratulations on your history with in the key two marriage

Aw, looks like Jack is still feeling guilty over the situation...poor guy :(

it is although you continue your history for those which reads

I always knew Sue had good taste ;) They are so blessed to have eachother.

Great scene. I love these men! This line is fabulous...

Jack replied, "Bobby, you waking up is the best birthday present I've ever got."

Great news all around and I'm very happy for Jack :)

good chapiter

jack plug had the nicest of birthday presents

Great news! Forgiveness seems to be the theme in this...glad there's enough to go around.

finally bobby is awakened

I'm relieved that Bobby's made it through the woods. It may be nothing but the way that Jack and Sue parted and Sue says she'll meet Jack back at the bullpen and he's feeling out of sorts seems foreboding. I think I'd like to tell him to be very careful considering Horse970's twists and turns!

Betty sure does get around the hospital! Can't say I've ever heard Tara call Jack 'Sparky' either. Not really an in-character story but interesting none-the-less. I'll be on the lookout for next chapter.