Nice, but how about another extra chapter about the actual sword-fight?

Very pleasant to read. thank you.

"Why do men have to kill each other over silly little things?"

Oh, Anna Maria, some men would not consider love a 'silly little thing.' :-) This is a sweet vignette and, once again, very romantic. Is it same to assume you have also written a scene for "Amnesty?" Please don't forget about "The Flaming Arrow."