OMG! I didn't expect it to be Natara! :O Literally my moth dropped haha, really sad but awesome chapter! :')

- Molly

it's really sad how her parents were taken from her so young...but i like it.
ok i know that sounded weird but i like how it made me feel sad, like i can feel her pain :')
update soon!

You know, I thought it was really cute, from the perspective of a little whiny kid :)
horrible death, and you know what, despite me not really knowing about cause of death, i want to read that second chapter very very very much

And yup, I can FINALLY read and take my time reviewing (yay!)

Awww... This is so sad but pretty good. I like the idea, poor Amy... And love how you included Jacob, Maria and even Charles Waldencrest haha

Oh my gosh! That was awesome but so sad!

- Molly