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babygurlaustin1 4/25/13 . chapter 1UPDATE SOON PLZ |
dyslexic.anagram 12/30/12 . chapter 1Well done. There are some tense issues, but nothing serious. I look forward to the next chapter! |
Vargas1989 12/14/12 . chapter 1Where is the rest! Lol please more |
Erised Bonaparte 11/2/12 . chapter 1... I just read this again.. Still great.. |
josefadama43 10/30/12 . chapter 1its when stories have a great start such as this that I wait untill they are done to read because now I'm waiting |
Guest 10/22/12 . chapter 1 OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME! Okay lower case now. But this is such an incredible idea. I can't wait to see what happens next. So many possibilities. Great intor to the story and writing style. Looking forward to updates. |
Smayz 10/20/12 . chapter 1Ooh, nice introduction, even though the proposition of being her slave seemed a bit abrupt, but I suppose there's no smooth transition into that anyways. I really would like to see where this goes. |
Yuri-hime 10/19/12 . chapter 1Ouch. Poor Kahlan. Hope she knows what she's doing |
FrenchGirl 10/18/12 . chapter 1 Ohoh ! Very promising start !:) Cara is so cute and Kahlan a naughty girl ! ;) I will be here for the next chapters ! |