|Reviews for A Show of Submission|
| babygurlaustin1 4/25/13 . chapter 1
UPDATE SOON PLZ
| dyslexic.anagram 12/30/12 . chapter 1
Well done. There are some tense issues, but nothing serious.
I look forward to the next chapter!
| Vargas1989 12/14/12 . chapter 1
Where is the rest! Lol please more
| Erised Bonaparte 11/2/12 . chapter 1
... I just read this again.. Still great..
| josefadama43 10/30/12 . chapter 1
its when stories have a great start such as this that I wait untill they are done to read because now I'm waiting
| Guest 10/22/12 . chapter 1
OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME! Okay lower case now. But this is such an incredible idea. I can't wait to see what happens next. So many possibilities. Great intor to the story and writing style. Looking forward to updates.
| Smayz 10/20/12 . chapter 1
Ooh, nice introduction, even though the proposition of being her slave seemed a bit abrupt, but I suppose there's no smooth transition into that anyways. I really would like to see where this goes.
| Yuri-hime 10/19/12 . chapter 1
Ouch. Poor Kahlan. Hope she knows what she's doing
| FrenchGirl 10/18/12 . chapter 1
Ohoh ! Very promising start !:)
Cara is so cute and Kahlan a naughty girl ! ;)
I will be here for the next chapters !