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| :) 2008-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good. |
| DragonRidingSorceress 2006-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseThat's so sweet! Aw... It seems Ani and Padme are suffering from DRL... Funny, I've got that, too. It stops me from writing fics... .:}\DRS/{:. |
| Ashariel 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... I loved it... So sweet... *sigh* :) |
| Misti Wolanski 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseGood writing, but aren't those observations more like Padmé than Anakin? —Especially after his mother died. He wants control, power. Even in his best moments that never quite leaves, if you pay close attention. Liked it, though. :) |
| anonymous 2004-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww...this is very beautifully written. Good job. I loved it! |
| Abigail-Nicole 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet! I loved it! |
| Midnight's Trinity 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, too sad! But cute. I always enjoy a good A/P fic. |
| Lyra Skywalker 2003-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHoly, that is SO sad! :(:( its soo cool! i'm so gonna cry soon! |
| Nestrik 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet and well written. Beautiful idea. |
| arressayy 2002-10-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I find Anakin to be an interesting character, and I think you write him very well. I can perfectly imagine him acting like this, but then it makes me wonder: why did he turn over to the Dark Side? (is that the proper term, or is Harry Potter invading my brain?) I mean, I know that he wanted power, but why?! My second Star Wars fic to read; I'm glad that it's yours. ^^ For what feels like the umpteenth time - you write very, VERY well, congratulations. RSA |
| Holly-Wan 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseSniff sniff That was a beautiful short vignette. I hope you write more. So sad, and sweet. |
| Darth Breezy 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet :) |
| Shadowgirl1 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! It really embodies their feelings for one another, plus it's well written. Nice job! |
| pokey 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, very sad. |
| MK in La La Land 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh how sad. The story fits the title. |