Whatever you want to do with this story, the formatting is making it very difficult to read. I suggest fixing the dialogue formatting first, as I have commented on in your other fic. Each new speaker should be a new paragraph. For example:

"Where am I?" he asked "Who are you?" [same speaker]
"My name is Vitaly." said the man. [new speaker]

Also, nationalities are proper nouns and should be capitalised e.g. American and Russian.

I think you're improving on your writing, good job cookie for you

BTW what are the secrets about

Little to fast and some spelling mistakes and how you phase the dialouge...but good story