Awww poor Mada xD
This is hilarious, hope you update soon

This was an adorable read. I loved the silliness of how Madara felt obligated to do something romantic but at the same time bitch and moan about. It doesn't help by adding a few sexist comment here and there. Still, his reactions were adorable to read.

I can see why this can never be canon, Mito deserves much better-but at the same time Mito would most likely be the only one who can tolerate and adore him :)

Hope you'll continue writing!

this bastard madara uchiha doesn't deserve anyone in this show that includes mito uzumaki

youre a genious! I like uchihas, and even more when one can make fun of them just like you did. Really, I like this madara much more...not that I dont like him in the manga (hes fun also, when addressing ugly senjus).

I hope you write more mito/madara, they are very funny and cute together! even though harashima doesnt approve.

I'm enjoying this story far too much. XD

Haha wow, my first anon flame. I feel honored someone thought I was important enough to take the time logging on anon to try and bring down my day. If you ever come back and read this, just know you've only inflated my ego. ** Just kidding, I don't care either way. Maybe one day I'll write a fic you enjoy.

Hey, the anon under me is a faggot. All she does is flame stories when hers gets flamed...oh wait, she doesn't even get enough reviews, I bet because hers are plagued with trash of the universe Mary Sue OCs and a disaster of a plot. Get this: Both Madara and Mito won't hesitate to KICK. YOUR. ASS.

If you have so much free time flaming stories which are doing far better than yours. How about you go and pick on the Yaoi/Yuri stories? Oh wait, they'll tear your buttocks off. You do not need to tell us who's the dumbass bitch here, we all know it's you. K, thanks. Have a nice day! _

P.S. Fuck off, thank you.

this is stupid madara uchiha has nothing to do with the uzumaki's nor mito dumbass bitch

Hilarious and beautiful at the end!

I just loved the doughmaking and Madara approaching cooking like it was battle. I could totally imagine him doing that and being really proud of himself. I could even hear his voice - "if cooking was hard, men would do it" - sexist git!

Please continue!

jaja por dios se puede ser tan malo en la cocina muy divertido sin duda pero pelifroso