|Reviews for What Should Have Been|
| Lady Kiddymonster 11/5/12 . chapter 1
This is pretty good, are you going to write more.
| Mother of Tears 10/29/12 . chapter 1
This is a good beginning. I like your prose.
| Lady Thomas 10/20/12 . chapter 1
| Thymelady 10/20/12 . chapter 1
Interesting set up! And Edith being the surviving twin while her brother died - interesting.