Wow.. Just wow... I dont even know what to feel... Just so many emotions! Its so heart breaking yet i cant stop reading! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

An amazing chapter, I couldn't stop reading!

- Molly

Great story i lovedd it ! :D hopefully mal gets with natara at the end lol
-esmerelda

Awesome story! Please fontinue

Awesome chapter! (:

Aww,thanks!

Ugh,Oscar.

Oh,Nat...I feel so bad for her :'(

I love love love this story!I hope
you can update soon.

-Tori:)

Can I just say how much I'm loving this story! It's really, really interesting and brilliant, I love it!
Take all the time you need with updates, I know the stresses of work load too so no worries :)
Can't wait for more!

- Molly

I like this so far!Can't wait for an update!

-Tori:)

Ummmm did you really describe Mal as a choirboy? Nothing really describes him less. Choirboys are supposed to all goody two shoes and all that stuff. But Mal is, as Kai would say: 'totally frickin badass' Not trying to be rude or anything, just stating something antonymish. Other than that GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT story. :D

Wow. The feelings involved are really deep. Especially the love, the sadness...

Great job, and keep writing! :)

Aww wow that was awesome and described so well, I could sense the emotion of it all coming from Mal and Natara. I love the idea, can't wait for more :)

- Molly

I... Loved it! 0 _ 0

This was amazing! I loved everything about it! I wonder what's going to happen next!

This was really good!

wow, that was amazing. I felt like the way you described it I was there. you did really good displaying Natara and Mal's feelings, it was great.