whoa... these were all brilliant, though i wish you'd had storm.

not a native english speaker? never would've guessed!

dark and fascinating...

I liked this but it bumped around- maybe because you didn't but enough space between paragraphs (I have a thing about the way stories look). You started to develope some ideas and then backed off, leaving me slightly confused. Interesting idea though

Oh... poor Sabretooth. *shakes head, and hugs a stuffed animal in lieu of the fictive* That's... *thinks about it, shakes her head, and hugs the stuffed creature*

*lips quirk* I like this part. *nods* It stikes something inside... It makes perfect sense that Mystique would feel this way, lost in a sea of characters and roles to play, but I think... every one feels that way. Does any one know who they are? Can they tell when the person talking from their mouth is their mother? Or father? Or best friend? What is you, and what is a product of the expectations of others? I suppose this review also works for the previous chapter as well. ^^;

I am... amazed, that you can delve into these questions that surface in peoples minds, and make them coherant. Every one has these thoughts, but most people seem to supress them as soon as they occur. *nods* You've expressed them wonderfully, it makes me wonder how you can manage to think them through as much as it took to write some of these.

*tilts head* Is everything so dark? Yes, I suppose it would be. Without the X-men, no one could be happy, they all would fall to the depths of dispair, and suicide, and no one would attempt to find their own happiness, with another group, a friend, or even a pet.

I am confused as to how you brought this about. They're not mutants... So did you take their family history and move from there? Did Jean's parents truely abuse her before it was known she was a mutant? Did Scott grow up in an orphanage in the comics? ^^; I don't know, that's why I'm asking. I don't want to go into why it might not make sense, if the back round you have here is true. ^^

Oh... oh please continue this thought! I know it's a little too light hearted for this series, but...! *bites lip* I'm a sucker for romance. *shakes head* This is wonderful. I love Logan, and I love the way you've set this up! It's... sad, and depressing, but at the same time there's this glimmer of hope, that if you look hard enough, you'll find it, and that life sometimes even helps out to push you in the right direction. *wry smile* But then, I always see the bright side. I'm sure another person could read it and see only the saddistic nature of life to taunt us with what we can't have by dangling it infront of our blind eyes. ^.~

*amused* Another person to be envious of, it appears. Scott was interesting, Jeans has hooked me. You write their sorrow so well, it's tangeable. You don't slack off and leave it with vague references, you actually go in depth without flooding the reader with too much information and making them Mary Sue-ish. *shakes head* Very good work. ^.~ My reviews will no doubt grow more enthusiastic as I read more. *grins*

Ooh, goodness, this is dark. *wide eyes* It's so... Goodness. It's enough to bring tears to my eyes. *saddly* It's true, how people turn blind eyes to the homeless. You portray the hopelessness of the situation so well. I'm eager to read the next ones.

I like this series, I especially liked the entry for Raven, she's been a favourite of mine for a while. I request you do Storm at some point!

You might want to bring Kitty into this series. I can see her as a master hacker, selling her talent for food or anything else she needs to keep herself alive.

This story is very interesting. I haven't seen any errors in your english. I look forward to more chapters, especially with the new movie coming out.

Hey, this is great.

wow, that was interesting, and dark, very well written though. C