|Reviews for The Request|
| Variaties 3/27/13 . chapter 2
uhm, can you make the format more readable
| Tuuna 2/9/13 . chapter 15
I really really like the plotline, its both sweet and a bit mysterious. I really look forward to what will happen next :D but one thing that is a bit disrupting when you read the story is the format of the text. The way the sentences gets cut off and then moved down a step makes it a bit difficult to read the story fluently. Its almost as if a paragraph was written and then "enter" was pressed to start a new paragraph, but at the wrong point. for example it is written:
"My mother, I was told had been in hard
labor with me for two days."
When it would be easier to read if it was
"My mother, I was told had been in hard labor with me for two days"
As I said I really like the story, but it would be even better if there weren't any irruptions in the middle of a sentence :) so no critique only an opinion.
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 31
I know that song too
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 28
I know that song
| recey2010 12/26/12 . chapter 35
A great story from beginning to end ! Looking forward to more of your work
| Sango A.R 12/26/12 . chapter 35
I just now got my laptop back and got your message. can't wait to read the sequel. i read the rest of The Request, you did a fantastic job. You're a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
| origamifoxes 12/22/12 . chapter 35
THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY, I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S FINISHED!
This was amazing, I loved it :)
Can't wait to read the sequel!
| Julye 12/22/12 . chapter 35
Wonderful story ! Thank you So much ! You did a great job !
| Rosejoanna 12/21/12 . chapter 35
Omg i love it!
| Voldyshorts 12/21/12 . chapter 34
I was hoping for twins...but I hope it's a boy so no one loses their jobs not unless there's a twist...which I think is possible with how brilliant you are.
| I love you Roza 12/21/12 . chapter 28
What the hell is wrong with you and Angelofthemorning? You like taunting us. She did it with Empress of Ireland an now your going to do it with Titanic! Poor Ariadne and poor poor Arthur. It was a good chapter except for when he said the name Titanic.
| origamifoxes 12/21/12 . chapter 33
Awesome chapter! Please let them tell each other how they feel, I can't bear it any longer! :D
Can't wait till the next update!
| Voldyshorts 12/20/12 . chapter 33
This chapter is sooo fluffy! I love it. Arthur is such a doting husband.
| SGundy 12/19/12 . chapter 33
Cute! I'm a little annoyed he hasn't freaking told her he loves her cuz it's so obvious! :)
| Rosejoanna 12/19/12 . chapter 32
omg hes back i love it!