Omgomgomg I LOVE this chapter! To be honest I totally forgot they were engaged! So that was surprise! I also adore the part towards the end with Mal and Nat. Adorable! Update soon!
-Malia

THIS IS SO AMAZING

I didn't read this story sooner because I thought it would be just like Capital Holiday, but I read it all last night and WOW I just love it!

Amy is so great in this! A lot of people tend to forget/not show the effects of Ken dying, and I really like that you did. Everyone's really great in this story, actually, and I found myself laughing a bit too loud for an eleven PM fanfiction reading.

AND THEN THE PROPOSAL OMG

I had tears in my eyes after reading the whole story. It's just so sad and amazing and sweet and I just love it!

I like it just as much as Capital Holiday, if not better!

Rose

Hey Molly,

Don't worry about not updating frequently I think me and most of the readers understand, plus when you do update it's make it 1000% bettwr to read because you never fail to amaze me with your amazingly written chapters!.

I gotta say I love this story so much, with every little detail you put in make this story a work of art.

Your so talented and you know how to make a story so great by the way you keep the reader engaged wanting more.

Everytime I see an update to this am super excited to read it because I just can't help but to smile, at this heart warming piece of heaven.

As always you live up to your name I gave you the Queen Of Maltara fluffiness! Adorable how you describe Mal and Natara love for one another. Incredible :')

Can't wait for an update. But no rush I know it will be worth the wait.

Miss ya hun and hope your okay soon you know where I am if you ever need me, am inbox away. Good luck for your exams and everything hun!

-Your "Big Sis Nat" LYLAS :') xx

Haha I loved that chapter it was so sweet and funny. Honestly you make your chapters sound really bad by saying you don't like them and I read them and they are still amazing! Good luck for your results I know how you feel because I'm feeling the same way :)

Welp, you got that boat, right? Sail over here and you can give me that hug! ;) that way I can immediately give you your cookies as well :') you're the best, Molly!

I mean... Like... I can't even describe what your chapter has done to me. It was so Maldorable and funny :D You're the queen for a reason!

It was so cute and I loved it! And take your time with updating, it's worth the wait! I know how to feels to be drowning in stress from everything, and I really hope things go better for you soon 3

Great chapter! Don't doubt yourself Molly, stay positive! You're incredibly talented and I loved this chapter!
Good luck with your exam results, I'm sure you did great!
-Jade

This chapter's great! Don't worry bout uploadin late coz every chapter surely is worth the wait, this just made my day! :) and don't be too hard on yourself, i'm sure things will be alright :) think positive and always be happy :D writing can really help when it comes to those things, and my hug is still an offer is you'd like one ;)

Hi molly!
Just wanted to say i am happy you are at least attempting to try to write again. The last couple months i have been having tons of trouble in school that just made me overall depressed. So i no what it is like to feel unmotivated. Just remember that we all here in the fandom think you are amazing! Never give up! Things will get better! :D lovely chapter as always.

Thanks for the cookie that's nice of you ;) Awwwww I just can't over Mal and Natara's cuteness :) Poor Mal got his hand licked my Kai hahahahaha XD Another awesomous (awesome and fabulous put together 'cause you're chapters are just that great) chapter ;) I don't know why you can't find the motivation because personally if I was able to write stories like yours I would be a lot more than motivated my friend :D

Magnificent, breathe taking like OMG so fricken adorable AWWW! _ Amazing chapter Molly and the ending absolutely perfect! :D :D

So sorry for the late review just been catching up once again with these amazing stories on here from being away for SO LONG on fanfic and like wow I just loved it, so much that I literally can't stop smiling! :D

This is why I give you the nickname because your such a talented and amazing writer you are the queen of Maltara Fluff! Incredible work Molly!.

You shouldn't doubt your abilities, always have faith, because your stories speak for themselves...stunning. You have great capabilities you just rock and many readers will voutch for that :')

Yeah I know long time no speak must do it more often miss our convo's :(

Oh don't worry about Luca it's fine :') that ending makes up for it hehe xD and can't wait for your next update it always a pleasure reading every detail that you put into every chapter! Love, Love! :D

Lylas Miss you Molly!

-Nat :') xx

Awwww, Maltara fluff! LOVE. :D (and yeah, I did just get around to reviewing this now. I read it like the day after you published it, and never reviewed, soo...) This was actually adorableeee, QOMF. Keep it up. :D

amazing story this is just wow... words cant explain it

I was crying a pool of tears happy tears about the engagement of Mal and Natara I'm soo happy now. Good luck for any other exams. I just found out I have about 10 exams. I hate exams. Best of luck ( by the way still the same person who commented last time about it being out of this world and as soon as it hits book shops because it will I will be buying it and reading it over and over again. Xxxx)

OMG LOVED IT! Hope your exams went alright :) Update soon :D