Good story
Continue and update soon :)

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Have you looked up the song yet?
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interestinggg storry
good writing
Is pearce gonna be in it?
Update soon

You should keep this up it is very good. A thing you should do is make sure you explain the characteristics of your oc's. I think this could turn into a really good story.