i can't wait for you to update again. I am really hooked.

The story is moving pretty slow. There's alot of backstory but not enough progression in the story. The backstory seemed like it could of been hold off abit longer until after their powers were used or when the dads came into the story.

I...cried at the last part...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAHHHHH

Coolio