I think you're doing it wrong. Because, well, it's starting to have some kind of interesting plot. But go on, I'd like to see more.

Also, shouldn't you put this one into HL/Portal crossover section?

I'm not going to bother reading this because you say up front that it's practically garbage, but I just want to let you know that reading the description entertained me to a significant degree.

Mother-fuzucking hilarious. I definitely want to see you continue with this story.

You, sir, need to update more often.

very great story