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| Reviews for Dreamsmoke |
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  Lou 4/16/06 . chapter 1 Woah. o_O *it'd be called thinking if I actually used my brain, but...'thinks about it'* That's cool. ;-D Heh. |
 Sesshomaru's-gal 12/2/05 . chapter 1It's sweeter when we FUCK, of course Gah! damn good line |
| KNR 12/6/04 . chapter 1 Dear Sunfreak, It is I, Starlit-Knight, once again. Here to say I injoyed yet another of your postings. I really injoyed Kagomes little 'Did I say that out load' scene. Talk to you soon. Starlit-Knight |
| Naomi 12/27/03 . chapter 1 that was so cute and sweet! you're good. ) |
| youkai chick supreme 7/30/03 . chapter 1 that was extremly weird. |
| Tashana Ambrosia 2/7/03 . chapter 1 This is just such a cool style of writing! I love the expressions. Great job! I love it! *Smiles* -Tashana Ambrosia |
| MuslimBarbie 1/26/03 . chapter 1 funny and sweet! |
| Sunder the Gold 12/13/02 . chapter 1 I actually had no trouble figuring out who was who. Leaving out things like Kagome:... Inuyasha:... Make it a little more confusing at first, but make it flow better with those things to get in the way. However, if its possible to type the words in different fonts or colors to distinguish the speakers, you might do that. Good poem, except for Kagome's rather vulgar slip. |
| AnimeDemon89 12/8/02 . chapter 1 Really Cool! |
| Hush Puppie 12/7/02 . chapter 1 Mmmm. I like. I like, I like. |
| SERENITY VIXEN 11/22/02 . chapter 1 AT FIRST I READ THE FIRST PART THEN I WENT BACK TO THE WEBPAGE THEN I SAW SWEETER WHEN WE FUCK SO I CLICKED BACK AND THEN IREAD THE WHOLE THING KINDA QUESTIONABLE POEM |
| warriorGL 9/21/02 . chapter 1 a cute, nice romance pome with out getting messy with fluff i like it! |
| Talon skydragon 8/28/02 . chapter 1 Aww, that was very sweet...and the simple style makes it strangely powerful. Love it. |
| Lottie 8/20/02 . chapter 1 I like it. It's cool. |
| Shawna 8/14/02 . chapter 1 i loved this one too! it was sooo cute |
