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MaryRose
2004-10-06
ch 4,
abuseI'm glad you finished it. Sad ending but sometimes I guess the story calls for it. Still a good story.
Ezjac
2004-04-19
ch 4,
abuseThat was so sad! I wasn't expecting Tyr to die, I thought there would be a happy ending (I'm a sucker for happy endings). Despite the ending I thought it was a good story and I enjoyed reading it. Will you be writing any more Tyr/Beka fics soon?
Ezjac
2004-03-27
ch 3,
abuseI like this story, will you be writing more soon?
Natta
2003-10-11
ch 3,
abuseGreat story, but I want more, I want to know what happens next!
CeredwenFlame
2003-02-20
ch 3,
abuseAbsolutely Rivoting.I cannot wait to see what more you have in store for the crew. Please let us have more!
Cestruma
2002-11-08
ch 3,
abusehey - I'd love to see more of this story. I know it's hard to continue a story that the show has already given its own answer to, I've a story that's been interupted for the same reasons, but given the crap screenplays they given us this season (other than the season opener which I liked.) We/I need fanfic writers to feed me what I can't seem to get from the show any longer - depth.
cestruma
PS If you do ever finish it, I'd like to add it to my site: Mars in Leo
http://www.thedrawlyn.com/LeoMars
Gina Stephens
2002-10-30
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou must finish this story I am waiting for the ending. It does not not need improving it just needs to be finish.
tracey
2002-08-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseInteresting story, but the chapters are too short!
carolann
2002-08-04
ch 3,
abuseI can't wait for them to make it back to the Andromeda. I'm wondering about how Tyr and Beka's relationship will change. After all, they now have 3 children together. Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read more.
jm
2002-08-04
ch 3, anon.
abuseOH NO!!! What a place to leave us!! This is too suspenseful and intense! Write really soon and lots....PLease!!
jm
2002-07-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseKnew that it seemed too easy for them to just walk out and go back home!!! Hope that Trance knows what she is doing and can help...now!!! Write lots more soon!!
carolann
2002-07-30
ch 2,
abuseGreat chapter. I'm glad that they are now leaving and that Tyr killed the Breakwraite. I'm hoping that Trance can help them get out safely with all of the babies. I can't wait until they are all back on Andromeda with the babies. Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read more.
Lora
2002-07-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseGood chapter. I thought they were going to demand to have their 'reproductive materials' back so that the aliens couldn't make any more babies, but they *could* make them.

Very well written. I look forward to reading more.
starswarm
2002-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI Love it! I love it! I love it!
the end of the chapter is so sweet and sad at the same time.
you must continue with it.
carolann
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseI like this story. I can't wait for Tyr & Beka to take their kids back to their own universe. Thanks so much for sharing. I can't wait to read more.
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