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Miss Riley Belle Shadows 5/15/13 . chapter 1Name: Lily Marie Dusk Age: (anywhere from 18 to 30, can't have Wonka be a pedophile now can we?) 23 Gender: (Female please) Female Physical description: (Height, weight, race, botox user, no fairy-tale creatures or hair that you say is naturally bubblegum pink or eyes that are naturally violet, clothing choices, scars, etc.) She is a 5'3/5'4 woman who enjoys music and is curious as heck. Platinum blonde with forest green eyes or husky blue eyes. weighs 113 (I don't know weight). She is an Islander of Fiji or Hawai'i. Crescent moon scar on her shoulder blade. She is a green, silver, and blue color person with a grey headband and black and white bracelet. She has star shaped earrings. No tattoos. Personality: (Try not to make her too perfect, she would be banned from the competition in a very hilarious fashion) She is funny and very curious. Loves art (not nuts over it) and has a habit to ramble like docter who. Her passion is imagination. She is a good dancer and has a great voice. Though is shy about her voice. History: (Again, not too tragic, normal histories are fine) She was born in the islands and her mother ( a singer and artist) and is of French decent, and islander. her father is a stern slightly emotionaly closed off man but cares for her a lot. he is from Bulgaria or Russia Family Relations: Russian family and French islander family. One Grandma named Olivia DeLuna on her moms side. and Dimitri korscov on her fathers. Former Employers: Work Experience: Do you want her to make it to the final 5: (Yes or no, explain why) Yes. She would be a perfect balance to Wonkas crazy love for the wired and chocolaty. A balance and someone shy to give a backdrop to him. But firmly passionate with a temper big enough to keep his crazy ideas in check. Plus life is always sweeter with a lady luck. Do you want her to fail her trial period: (Yes or no, explain why) No. I want her to pass because she would be a funny, creative, loon with a strong temper. Who is chosen for her passion and desire to make and create. Someone who also slightly scarred the judge. Do you want her to win: (Yes or no, explain why) Ya! The driving force behind him. Someone to bring life and spirit into the candy wonderland. Music is a gift and art that inspires. A person who is as dedicated to things and curious to try something new would be nice. She could do work and have fun. Not be a snobby, rich, "perfect woman" type of girl. You're average female. Do you want her to fall in love with Wonka: (Yes or no, explain why) I would rather have Wonka fall for her. Him to be interested in her uunique and bubbly personality. The way she can tell off someone and call them a rude, unimaginative boar for not looking outside the box. Having Wonka be the one to win her over would be cute. Her also being a bit of a clueless romantic would help. Though not totally oblivious to his actions. Just a bit skeptical at first though completely nice. How did she find her Silver Ticket: She found her ticket in the coconut candy wonka wonder berry treat when she got it at her favorite shave ice paradise shop. |
dionne dance 11/21/12 . chapter 1Ok, it's late, but if you are still looking... Name: Belva Bingcherry Age: 30 Gender: Female (doi.) Physical description: Around 5' 2", approx 130 lbs, English(Britain), milk white skin, large chocolate eyes, very white teeth, always wears bright cherry red lipstick, black hair cut in a conservative bob. Very striking appearance. Wears conservative business suits in royal blue, red, and occasionally navy with polka dots. Fond of bow blouses, high heels, and scarves. Wears large round plastic framed glasses. Personality: Belva is an intelligent witty lady who does not suffer fools. She is very organized and wants to whip the factory into shape. She uses her razor sharp wit to disguise her emotional insecurities. Belva lovew broadway and show tunes, but can be a bit stodgy. The Oompa Loompas fall in love with her and make it their personal mission to loosen her up a bit. They are hopeful she will help them in their musical productions, and really want Willy to keep her around. History: Belva is a 4th generation librarian. She wants to apply her dewey decimal system and card catalog expertise to Willie's candy creations and inventory system. Family Relations: Mother in a nursing home with Alzheimers, niece who is in college. Former Employers: The public library Work Experience: Librarian, of course. Totally addicted to chocolate and her treadmill. Thinks running around the factory without using the glass elevator will allow her to continue her chocolate addiction without losing her figure. Do you want her to make it to the final 5: Yes, I want her to make it. Willie has high hopes for her, as in some ways, she reminds him of himself (milky skin, hair color, striking appearance). He feels her organizational skills will be an asset to the company, that her stodgy-ness may help balance some of the insanity in the factory. However, he doesn't want her conservative nature to be a downer for candy creation. Her chocolate addiction is also a little worrisome for him. Do you want her to fail her trial period: She fails the trial period for the position of secretary. Willie thinks she is way over qualified. However, the Oompa Loompas convince him that they cannot live without her, and he hires her as a warehouse inventory manager. Do you want her to win: No. She wants to help Willy's perfect love match win. (She's been reading a lot of romance books at the library and is dying to play matchmaker). Do you want her to fall in love with Wonka: No. She will definitely want to reorganize Willy's life. She sees that one of the other contestants is Willy's perfect girl, and tries to help that contestant win. How did she find her Silver Ticket: She's addicted to chocolate, romance novels, and her treadmill (how do you think she stays at 130 pounds?). She stops by the hospital to visit her mom, and buys the Wonka bar with the winning ticket from the hospital gift shop. |
DarkMousyRulezAll 10/29/12 . chapter 1Agh it's the 29th, would you still take her? ...I hope so.. Name: Amelia (Amelie) Joyce Age: 24 Gender: Female (doi.) Physical description: Around 5' 6", approx 141 lbs, English(Britain), does not use botox or any other artificial enhancer of body, fair skin with freckles over the nose, Dark Brown hair, light green eyes, lip color is naturally a darker pink but she wears a light red lipstick. Amelie has scars on both of her hands Personality: Amelia is a very quiet girl, with a very soft personality. She has trouble conveying emotions/thoughts, but she is kind-hearted. Her quietness however does lead to her detaching herself and isolate from others, leading others to have a difficult time of communicating with and helping her. History: When Amelia was very young, her parents disappeared, never came home from work. She was put into foster system until she was 10, where a middle aged couple adopted her. At age 8, she acquired burns on her hands from a cooking explosion, which caused the scars that are still present. At age 20, she moved out from her foster parents' home to an apartment where she currently lives. Her birthday is November 4th. Family Relations: Mother (missing), Father (missing) Foster mother and father (still living) Former Employers: Booksellers, Starbuck's Coffee Work Experience: Customer Service at a book store, maker of the drinks at Starbuck's Do you want her to make it to the final 5: Yes, I want her to make it. Amelia is a hard worker and is eligible, in my own personal opinion, compared to any other typical woman. Do you want her to fail her trial period: Honestly, I would like for her not to, but that all depends on the situation, now doesn't it? :3 Do you want her to win: I am hoping she wins. Of course she is my character, that's obvious, but also because I think her nature will balance out that of Willy Wonka and be brought out by Charlie. Do you want her to fall in love with Wonka: Yes, I believe Wonka needs some love, and although I am unsure of how exactly it might work out, but I know she really looks up to Willy Wonka, and will develop feelings. How did she find her Silver Ticket: she had heard of the tickets and became increasingly excited each time the bookstore had stocked Wonka bars and each day on her break, she'd buy only one bar for luck and split the chocolate with her co-workers. on her 10th day of doing so, she happened to buy the bar with the silver ticket Hope you like Amelia and use her for your story! I'm looking forward to it! -DMRA |
Shini-kage64 10/22/12 . chapter 1Name: Dylan Reid Age: 20 Gender: Physical description: (Height, weight, race, botox user, no fairy-tale creatures or hair that you say is naturally bubblegum pink or eyes that are naturally violet, clothing choices, scars, etc.) Personality: (Try not to make her too perfect, she would be banned from the competition in a very hilarious fashion) History: (Again, not too tragic, normal histories are fine) Family Relations: Former Employers: Work Experience: Do you want her to make it to the final 5: (Yes or no, explain why) Do you want her to fail her trial period: (Yes or no, explain why) Do you want her to win: (Yes or no, explain why) Do you want her to fall in love with Wonka: (Yes or no, explain why |