|Reviews for Through these veins my love flows|
| Sundae Girl 1/4/13 . chapter 4
BTW he is not welsh
| DandelionHippogriff 11/1/12 . chapter 6
Hey, me again!
Still lovely! Your one shots just make me feel so warm and happy inside, and in my humble opinion that's the whole point of fluff, so you must be doing something right! Your characterisation is still great.
Same little comment as in my previous review about the speech marks, so here's an example:
One of your lines reads
"I hate Christmas" he moaned.
Now this should be
"I hate Christmas," he moaned.
That should just help neaten things up a bit and stop any nitpicking grammar freaks like me get distracted from the quality of your writing, and if you ever send any of your work off to competitions or for publications (which I hope you will, because you have a talent) then it should make you look like a more experienced and serious writer.
Overall, your standard is very high and I think Debbie Moon would be proud to see such good quality work being spawned from her series!
Next time, could you maybe write something with a bit more Tom and Shannon in? I know these are Maddian-centric but I just love those characters and I'd love to see how you interpret their reaction to their friends' growing relationship. That would absolutely make my day!
Hope that helped and you didn't get too bored reading it!
| Vlarin-CC's no.1 fan girl xxx 10/31/12 . chapter 6
Amazing xx :)
| Guest 10/31/12 . chapter 6
These are just getting better and better. It's the bits I wish were in the series...
| Firegirl99 10/28/12 . chapter 5
aw! Thnakz for using my suggestion! I found it a bit harsh how you refered to Shannon as 'the ginger' but I liked the chapter! Please update soon! :)
| YouFoundMeAgainXx 10/28/12 . chapter 5
i love these are amazing !
| Ilovewolfblood 10/28/12 . chapter 1
I love these!
I LOVE WOLFBLOOD!
Lol! Go me! ; p
| DandelionHippogriff 10/27/12 . chapter 5
Awwww! Such a perfect first kiss! Be careful with speech marks, there should be a punctuation mark before you close them, but otherwise just a lovely, fluffy, cute strory. More please!
| MyGhela 10/27/12 . chapter 5
that was really cute but maybe next time you could make a linebreak for every scene so it wont be that confusing when reading
| Nightfury991 10/27/12 . chapter 5
Great! Read every single one and loved them all!
Next chapter, now please!
| Vlarin-CC's no.1 fan girl xxx 10/27/12 . chapter 5
Amazing please do more like this more fluffiness please
| Firegirl99 10/26/12 . chapter 4
Never really!? Now that's just cruel! PLEASE let there be a kiss in the up coming chapters! BTW snap. I'm not welsh but I can speak a little bit of it! :)
| Firegirl99 10/25/12 . chapter 3
haha good idea. I'm loving how your doing it in 3rd person narrating different times and places where they happen to be. Please update soon! :)
| bairin breac 10/24/12 . chapter 3
Ooooh I do like these dribbles. My only thing would be put commas before the closing speech mark sorry.
| Waffles Of Doom 10/23/12 . chapter 3
These are absolutely amazing! They really made be smile :) I hope you do keep writing them, I'll be looking forward to an update- but I understand school can be a massive pain.
But yeah. I loved all of them!