good boy Piers. its nice to see a story about him. great job, later dude.

YES! Love this story. Good moral at the end. You are an up-and-coming writer!

That's a really cool idea!

Interesting take on Piers! Very unique.

Interesting take on Piers and Dudley. I liked it quite a bit (although the formatting monster could have been nice and either indented or put spaces between paragraphs! Not you, I'm sure -- my files don't come up right either.)

I particularly liked it that you haven't had Piers really change, but just shown us the seeds of what might be a change. The dialogue really sounded like teenagers too (including the bad language.) Thanks for mentioning this at the Sugarquill.

Excellent characterization, and good dialogue as well. Also an original idea for a one-shot. I hope the lack of reviews hasn't discouraged you, because this is quite good.

Wow. Through reading this, I was actually able to sympathize with Piers, of all characters! Actually, I don't hate him or Dudley (well, maybe Dudley...sometimes...) but...truth be told, I don't think about them that often.
Anyway, this was great. You're a good writer. You really are.

Dudley and Piers were characterised so well in this! I could actually imagine them having this conversation. And I loved the ending... ^ ^