i really enjoyed jesse's first day, highly commical and very imaginable. I could really see it happening. Well done!
Radar fan

hey, i really loved this story. You should write more.
while, thanks for writing this.
kas

This is adorable. I love the humor.

I love all your stories, but this is one of the bests. I laughed myself to death about it. Please write more!!

This was good, I enjoyed it! Keep writing, your doing a extremely good job!

This was a lovely story. I really enjoyed it.
Tracy

I have three of your stories so far Ann and this one is definitely my favourite so far. The image of Jesse hidden under a pile of boxes is wonderful.

Jesse's first day was really funny. I can't wait to read more of your work.