Your fanfic is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're going to get.

That was again a cool one.

Nice one about Akane being turned down by Ranma. I liked that way.

Please update soon!

Still enjoying this. Volcano? wasn't on my list of jungle hazards, but I guess it works.

Keep up the writing!

Heh, I was starting to get worried that you'd forgotten or lost interest in this story. Thanks for the update, it really brightened my day!

You know, I've been thinking recently about Ryoga's actions. They seem FAR too aggressive and manipulative. I can't help but wonder if he's being controlled somehow. Maybe that magic jewel that's supposed to somewhat protect whoever's wearing it was enchanted by that bitch who gave Ryoga the game in the first place and is using it to control him. Ergo, to get her 'vengeance' on Cologne by disrupting the game and getting Shampoo/Ranma killed, deported, and/or trapped in the game for eternity somehow. I say this because Ryoga's obsession seems a bit too focused and cunning for him, especially the roundabout way he's trying to keep the game from being finished.

But I must say that I'm SO HAPPY that the gameplay has resumed, along with the story itself. The chewing out that Ranma gave Akane was very much enjoyed by yours truly. But I have to admit that I was surprised that Ukyo didn't seem to have any reaction to seeing her chief rival get her just desserts handed to her.

Also, there's something that I think might be kinda interesting to see happen, it pertains to the military. What would happen if Togo had actually managed to catch Ranma and Shampoo and imprison them on say a warship out in the ocean. He could even have the ship abandoned and left afloat, letting the currents carry it away from Japan and let some other worthless country deal with the jungle? How would the game adjust that, them being on a ship out in the ocean? But if they were recaptured, wouldn't Togo also try to have some scientists brought in to examine the game and to see if anyone else could move the pieces? What would happen if the dice were rolled while they were on the ship? And here's another idea to toy with: what would happen if they were in a helicopter when they rolled the dice?

Man, so many different possibilities! I can't wait for next chapter!

P.S. The volcano totally caught me by surprise! But if you're going to include land-changing powers like that, I can picture whitewater rapids, waterfalls, landslides, and even meteorites. Just some ideas for ya.

So finally Akane makes an attempt to apologize, and because she expects an apology from Ranma as well, she doesn't really mean it? She's like Genma? And in the meantime, in your story Ranma has never apologized for anything he has ever done to Akane. I was hoping to see Ranma willing to meet Akane halfway, but apparently, that's not to be. Because, of course, Ranma is so honorable, and so blameless, and is nothing but an innocent victim. Not that it isn't entirely in character for Ranma to refuse to accept responsibility for his actions, but I doubt that is what you are intending here.

At least this chapter means that the secret of P-chan's identity is out. Not that Ryoga's been all that in character either. At this point, I'm just hoping Akane realizes their friendship is over, because Ranma obviously wants to end it. Which I'm sure will be quite satisfying to those other readers who want to see Akane "get what she deserves".

Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

great ch hope for more

volcano nice

Nice chapter! :) Keep up the writing!

Amazing story great job and good luck!

Wow again a great one.

Please update soon!

Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

"Trapped and unable to do anything, Ranma felt something in him snap and take over. He glared at the tiger and his body tensed up, and it felt like some sort of energy once suppressed was now free."

Why does everyone believe that the neko-ken is some kind of "super mode" that can be "mastered"? I may sound sound like a butthurt canon abider, but...that's total BS. All the neko-ken does is drive Ranma temporarily insane. In that state, he behaves like a cat - and the cat sees no reason to hold back his real strength and speed, that's probably why people believe the neko-ken is some kind of power up.

Anyway, I'm ranting " Well, that chapter's nice as always. Good to see that the soldiers grow suspicious off Ryoga - he's in deep trouble now and yelling "Make me!" while surrounded by some armed soldiers is a very bad idea.

Your fanfic's like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get.

"I just gotta be myself," that's gotta be my most favorite line of the chapter/story so far! That is SO Happosai, I love it! And what's better, you're making him more of an enjoyable character than the panty-thieving, undominatable menace that he's usually portrayed as. Kudos for that!

And so Ranma's unlocked his new 'Nekoken' and Shampoo's on the warpath against Ryoga. All I can say about that is: it's about TIME!

Still, if there's one thing that I truly didn't like it was the general's attitude towards Shampoo. The Japanese do seem to have a fetish against all things foreign and especially 'gaijin' like Shampoo. So, while you're depiction of his attitude was probably very accurate, it's also kinda sad that that's probably also very similar to Ranma's initial opinion of Shampoo (even/especially in canon). It'd make for some interesting character development if Ranma started thinking back on the general's attitude and question just why it upset him and to ask himself when/if he ever had the same views.

Thanks for updating again! You definitely made my day with this!