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Reviews For: A FATHER'S FEARS

LisaG
2007-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was a really sweet short story. Put a smile on my face! :)
epalladino
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abuseNice. Thanks, Beth Palladio
Anya2
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseAnn! You know how much I love Jesse when he's sleeping! As always you've described it perfectly.

I loved the stories of little Steve and little Jesse - I could definitely imagine them getting up to stuff like that. I could just see Jesse with that eager little grin of his as he slid down the stairs - and the thought of him playing in the snow is somehow very endearing.

I also liked all the things Dane said about missing out of Jesse's childhood. You managed to write it in a very realistic way.

In case you hadn't figured it out this was the story that I hadn't read!

Claire
Tracy2
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseThis was nice. I liked the way it was Mark and Dane who were the main characters in this
Tracy
Karen Faye
2002-07-20
ch 1,
abuseThis was great. Keep up the great work.
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