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| LisaG 2007-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a really sweet short story. Put a smile on my face! :) |
| epalladino 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseNice. Thanks, Beth Palladio |
| Anya2 2002-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAnn! You know how much I love Jesse when he's sleeping! As always you've described it perfectly. I loved the stories of little Steve and little Jesse - I could definitely imagine them getting up to stuff like that. I could just see Jesse with that eager little grin of his as he slid down the stairs - and the thought of him playing in the snow is somehow very endearing. I also liked all the things Dane said about missing out of Jesse's childhood. You managed to write it in a very realistic way. In case you hadn't figured it out this was the story that I hadn't read! Claire |
| Tracy2 2002-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was nice. I liked the way it was Mark and Dane who were the main characters in this Tracy |
| Karen Faye 2002-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. Keep up the great work. |