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radar fan
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abusewhat a very comical story i really found this funny.
keep it up
radar fan
Coz5000
2004-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseEXCELLENT! Funniest fic I've ever read!
Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan
2004-03-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was the funniest story I've ever read. I was wondering when Jesse and Steve would battle. I like the mention of David and Goliath, being a Christian myself. Watch your puncuation and spelling, but great plot! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
~Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan
milford
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is a lovely cute story. I laughed out loud and could see the "boys" in this scene very easily. I hope you have more stories planned. Thank you for sharing
Tracy2
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseI get the feeling you really enjoyed writing this.
I was nicely done.
Tracy
Janet2
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseAnn, I really enjoyed this one. I thought it was really funny and I could just see Steve standing there egging Jesse on.
WolfMaiden
2002-07-21
ch 1,
abuseThat was just priceless! Now, as soon as I manage to get up off the floor where I'm rolling around laughing, I'll be doing good. ^_^
Karen Faye
2002-07-20
ch 1,
abuseI think that this was a really cute story. I hope that you write more soon.
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