Hey, MyPetPotatoCanSwim (cool name, btw). Your story is really interesting, please update? Pretty please, with a pink ribbon round it (yes, I'm really that annoying)?
Oh, and in case you're wondering, I don't have a profile on FF. Just wanted to clear that up.

OMG i just read both chapter please write more.

Okay, I know this is a high school fic and being lesbian is fine and whatnot, but remember that there are middle schoolers that come to read this. Plus this kinda ruined my preteen-hood. Maybe try toning it down a bit on the M-rated stuff and swearing? Even for a high school fic you're kinda crossing the line. Seriously, sex in the locker room? How about just kissing or something? Don't scar the innocent minds of preadolescent youth :P

... O.O Addie likes Jenny.

Okay, you've got to continue.